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Alone in my dark
Contributed by
shadowsofmyheart
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 09:08:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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People who think their alone.
In who they are and what they aren't
Their wrong.
I hurt the same .
You look at some one and think you see their life.
Perfect and Simple,
All they have are their stupid worries.
Yours are deeper.
Hurt harder.
They have what you want.
They just dont see it.
Alone.
We are all alone
Alone in the crowded room.
You can pull someone next to you.
So your not alone.
But you are.
I just want what I cant have.
Desire what everyone wants, and gets.
But I sit in the shadows and wait.
Afraid of getting hurt.
Afraid of life outside my darkness.
Wont let anyone in.
Sit alone.
People are there,
but it doesnt seem to matter
I feel I'm always alone
Are you there
Can you hear me.
What I desire has become what I need.
Consumed my mind and covered it in darkness
What I wanted the most wont go away.
I would rather be loved and betrayed,
Then never loved at all.
Yet I stay hidden in the shadows,
Afraid of the life outside my darkness.
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Re: Alone in my dark
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 09:49:46 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional. |
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Re: Alone in my dark
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by n2dep2care on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 10:05:37 PM AEST
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Hard hitting and emotion filled. I can feel the pain and loneliness just reading your words. Most of all I understand. Electric write. Bravo!
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Re: Alone in my dark
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:44:25 AM AEST
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| a very sad powerfull write |
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Re: Alone in my dark
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:24:32 PM AEST
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wow this is immense. i love it, despite how painful it is, and how true and sharp some of what you say is. beautiful, it really hit home.
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Re: Alone in my dark
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by travisk on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:48:04 PM AEST
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| nice one |
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