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Suck My Blood Till You Are Dead
Contributed by
outsider
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 04:38:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Weep tears of gilded silver
May they drop upon shattered rocks
You can suck me dry and drain me
But in the end its you who will die.
May you move inside me
Feel you beneath my skin ever searching
Remove from me everything that I am
Leave me a brittle husk, but in the end its you who will die.
Suck my blood remove every cell
Take my tissue and my marrow till all of me is gone
Leave me an empty shell it doesn't matter
I will remain but you will die.
Probe within and leach my bones if you wish
Leave me skeletal stark
Thrust all of you within me till all of me is gone
Drain me and you will die.
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Re: Suck My Blood Till You Are Dead
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 05:44:52 AM AEST
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A very interesting and colourful write, some great lines too. Nothing like u usually write but very imaginative. I really like it.
JIH : ) |
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Re: Suck My Blood Till You Are Dead
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 11:22:47 AM AEST
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| very interesting..hmmm. |
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Re: Suck My Blood Till You Are Dead
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by freckle on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 08:26:18 PM AEST
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| Dark,but good! |
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