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Observation of Obvious
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:55:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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No creative line
No time
No time soon
Settles quickly for small minutes in the afternoon
Listens for inspiration to The Dark Side Of The Moon
Friends are not what they used to mean
Needed substantial time for no reason
Empty like wisdom not spoken out loud
A super star disappears in the crowd
and shots fired don't ring a bell
Death to the limits of internal hell
that rages and melts down the walls...
It's amazing the places that exist at all
Are not these words we use evil?
And anything silent is somehow sinful
in a spinning world where we all are mental
Backwards to degrees of our own separation
living but thinking that it's all preparation
for happy at the end of a cycle
then death recycles the
organic breathing and bleeding
with wasted time ***** lacks emotional feeling
said thoughtful continues through-out days like a plague
Diseased and realistic ways
of society in our time
feeds garbage into the back of our minds
and no escape save for abstinence and
no air
Copyright ©
Red_October
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2004-11-02 07:55:47]
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Re: Observation of Obvious
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:56:49 AM AEST
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a very good write about life. life can be so tough sometimes,
takecare
pixie xx |
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