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Who Do You See?
Contributed by
twitch06
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:15:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I wish that you would settle down
Youre driving me insane with
Your running around
Please settle down, youre making me dizzy
Sit down for a while
And cool down, be calm
Stop making me dizzy and even yourself
When you see straight again,
Who do you see?
I see you, and I always have while
You were running around
You where panicing, and I was there
But you acted like you didnt care
When I see you get upset
I was always there
Maybe it was better for me to
Have just left you running around.
Running around searching for
Something, but you didnt know
That you already had it.
So now, Who do you see?
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twitch06
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2004-11-02 08:15:41]
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Re: Who Do You See?
(User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:19:21 AM AEST
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Interesting write,
Sometimes people dont realise wot they already have.
I myself am one of those people.
The image of this person running around all i saw was myself.
Thanks for sharing a gd write.
Take care
Gen x |
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Re: Who Do You See?
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:20:38 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem, I can't quite grasp it, but i think i have felt this feeling before. This poem was like Deja Vu to me. A very good poem, nonetheless. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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