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Forgotten
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 02:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Paralyzed Lying in a pool of rejection.
Waiting Bleeding in a candy-cane dream.
Falling Ive failed and now its all gone.
Stuck in this world this world without hope.
Breathing this air breathing without reason.
Dying on my own on my own because you left me.
Grieving this way this way for all eternity.
I am the vampire of self-ruin.
And Im the archangel of my own demise.
Ive wasted my time and Ive wasted yours too.
Ive been here so long, just waiting for you.
You dont even know because your not even here.
Ive been this way forever this way forever more.
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2004-11-02 14:14:56]
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Re: Forgotten
(User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 03:41:25 PM AEST
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Bleeding in a candy-cane dream
is a cool line.
Yeah, it's a nice piece
of work.
--Mothy |
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Re: Forgotten
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:28:00 PM AEST
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| I liked the image of the candy cane... but I don't get the vampire...thing.... cause...um... your not a vampire. |
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