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Voices of your memorie
Contributed by
-Lord-Vince-Black-
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 02:47:20 PM in AEST
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He's sitting in a corner
Writing, wondering, thinking
Listening to the voices in his head
Writing down what him is told
Writing down not to forget his pain
The pain he keeps in his heart
His red heart of blood
Of the wounds of his pain
Little cuts in his heart for the pain
he wants to cry it out
To clear his heart that's filled
Filled with the graves of his thoughts
Things to remember his pain
The pain of his life
That's almost not worth it to live for
He doesn't want it
He hates it
But yet, he doesn't end it
Why?
Because he could be happy
He has dreams
Dreams of a better life
A life without pain
Where he has no voices in his head
That make him think about
Love, hate, murder, friendship
He hates the voices for making him think
But yet he loves them
Because he knows their wright
But doesn't want to admit it
So everytime when he's depressif
He sits in a corner
Writing, listening to the voices he love
creating another grave
for another painly memorie
Thet cuts in my heart...
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Re: Voices of your memorie
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 02:57:43 PM AEST
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I loved it.
Excellent write
on the inner thoughts.
I hope you will watch
your typos, man.
The Poetry Clones
will regard you as inferior
just for that, neverminding
the power of your words.
I've seen it happen
to many great poets.
--Mothy |
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Re: Voices of your memorie
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 03:01:08 PM AEST
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wow this is a really good poem.. you have expressed yourself well.. sometimes the voice of inner pain surley comes through..
Great job
peace and hope
*JENNA* |
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Re: Voices of your memorie
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:29:52 PM AEST
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| I liked it... I wish it had a tiny bit more rhythem in it but your doing good... keep it up. |
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Re: Voices of your memorie
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 11:52:42 PM AEST
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well done
Michelle |
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