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How I Feel About Her
Contributed by
philxcool
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 04:47:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How I Feel About Her
Senses reeling
Im beginning to swoon
Just like that feeling
When I see the moon
On an immaculate night
And a secluded beach
Its right in my sight
Yet out of my reach.
As close as can be
Yet the furthest star
So easy to see
But impossibly far.
With an angelic glow
It envelopes the skies
From my view below
It fills both eyes.
Inviting my touch
But then again no
I cant take this much
Of her taunting me so.
Burning with desire
But Im still so unsure
My heart filled with fire
Thats how I feel about her.
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philxcool
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2004-11-02 16:47:49]
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Re: How I Feel About Her
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 11:50:24 PM AEST
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a sensual and romantic delight well done
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Re: How I Feel About Her
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by jmpy84 on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:33:01 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: How I Feel About Her
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 06:55:47 AM AEST
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awww this is so lovely, really warm and touching,
takecare
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Re: How I Feel About Her
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by Kisch on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:01:36 PM AEST
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Very sweet. so so cute.
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