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Contributed by
kandyklown999
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 05:32:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Where I can stay, where I dont need to care.
A place I know you're not there.
A time where noones around, i'm dizzy, I faint.
Colors surround me like pastels, and paint.
Visions in my eyes, but none like today.
This white dust consumes me, and takes me away.
Copyright ©
kandyklown999
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2004-11-02 17:32:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: None
(User Rating: 1 ) by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:58:54 PM AEST (User
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Sad and poignant. Short and to the point. Nice write!
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(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 11:49:06 PM AEST (User
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nicely done though touching and sad
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