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Smudge It All Away
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 05:57:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sickness rises in my throat, trembling hands give it all away.
Stepping across the threshold, I smell that familiar smell
Faces, people, I hide (don't look at me) - I can't face them today;
My face, my non-existence says it all - nothing left to tell.
Tears, pouring as never-ending rain.
They will never understand, if I can't understand myself.
Input from me (they're still waiting), and me they blame;
Grudges still held, mutuality, no attempt at comprehending.
Recognition, dismission, confusion, disruption;
I seem to have done it all over again -
Ruined days, months, lives with my depression
And the ink sets in deeper, an eternal bloodstain.
Hanging by a tenterhook, I wait;
A month to wait for somene to tell me to fight.
I know not how to get out of this state;
Whilst my blood shows me the way out of the light.
Thoughts scattering, mind wandering away from me
To you, my darling, and your face, your lips, your eyes.
I take myself to a land of happiness, where I can be free;
I take myself, with you, to the skies (no more lies).
Thoughts, ideas, of ending it all;
No more hiccups, just one last fall.
No concrete to land on, no pain hereafter;
Just an everlasting dream of myself with you.
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Re: Smudge It All Away
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by shadowsofmyheart on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:18:02 PM AEST
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Tears, pouring as never-ending rain.
that is my fav line.
and i loved the last line..... its like something in one of my privaite poems |
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Re: Smudge It All Away
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 04:01:40 PM AEST
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Wow I have to disagree with you this was so
amazingly good. I liked the second stanza I
think the best although I loved it all. The
images put in my head were, at times,
disturbing which isn't a bad thing. Wow, really
good poem Char.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Smudge It All Away
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by arden on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:25:34 AM AEST
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raw poem and yet it was amazing charlotte.
so deep and meaningful. i also have to disagree with you and say this poem was awesome. i read and reread it again.
loved it girl.
great job, 5 stars
Becky |
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Re: Smudge It All Away
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:10:33 PM AEST
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| So sad. A poignant song. |
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