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is it over yet
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:25:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Waking everyday to the bleak and the torment.
I walk to hear your voice say, I am nothing, not normal...
I go to your eyes and they don't even care,
They don't see I've been crying,
They don't see I've been dying.
I wake to this dream, this dream of perfection.
To be you, to be me, to be happy as me, to be you and be sad.
And I go to my evil and I sit down and dine.
I'm faced with these demons day after day.
The same old thing, the same routine.
Maybe tomorrow I wont wake once at all.
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Re: is it over yet
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by slayer_015 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:31:18 PM AEST
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Powerful emotions.I enjoyed this poem very much.I know this same pain you feel.Great
expression of your feelings.
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Re: is it over yet
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 10:05:25 PM AEST
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i love it. short and sweet...utterly beautiful
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