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Suffering
Contributed by
jade01
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:52:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Its all black around her,
she has no way to escape.
All she sees is a blur,
she was a victim of rape.
Four hours ago her life was happy,
Now everything is dark.
She doesnt want her life to be sappy,
If only she didnt walk through that park.
He left her there to die,
to lay in pain and suffer.
She cant see anyone nearby,
Her breathing is getting rougher.
Now all she sees is a light
which will make everything all right.
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jade01
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2004-11-02 19:52:46]
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Re: Suffering
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by RhythmBndt on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:39:49 PM AEST
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