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CHANGED MY LIFE
Contributed by
shisgirl
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:57:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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YOU CAME AND CHANGE MY LIFE WHICH YOU THOUGHT WAS COOL TURNED IT UPSIDE DOWN YOU THOUGHT MEN SHOULD RULE YOU SAY THAT I'M BENEATH YOU NO GOOD AT ALL YOU SHOVED, PUSHED , HIT ME A ***** IS WHAT I WAS CALLED YOU SAID THAT YOU LOVE ME THEN I'LL TAKE YOU BACK YOU BLACK MY EYE AT THE DROP OF A HAT YOU TOOK ME FOR GRANTED, YOU MADE ME CRY YOU SAID IT'LL NEVER HAPPEN AGAIN WHICH WAS A LIE I NEEDED TO GET AWAY, FAST AND IN A HURRY YOU CAUGHT WIND, AND YOU DISCOVER THAT I WAS PALNNING TO LEAVE, GET OUT, GET AWAY YOU CLOSE THE DOOR AND MADE ME STAY IF YOU COULDN'T HAVE ME THAN NO ONE WILL BEAT ME SO BAD, LOOKED LIKE EMMITT TILL THE PAIN INSIDE WILL NEVER HEAL PLEASE SOMEBODY HELP ME DON'T LOOK THE OTHER WAY DYING IS NOT WHAT I WANT TO DO TODAY....
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Re: CHANGED MY LIFE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:19:23 PM AEST (User
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interesting use of history in there with emmitt till...he may be able to hurt you physically, but don't let him defeat you psychologically...there is where the battle is won.
wonderfully painful poem |
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Re: CHANGED MY LIFE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th February 2006 @ 01:55:14 PM AEST (User
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this is amazing. it's like your screaming for help, and no one's listening...wow
beautiful write
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