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Tell Me The Future
Contributed by
DragonLuvSong
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:00:52 PM in AEST
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I want to know
what will be,
at the time
of next sunrise.
Can someone tell me,
what I will see,
what I will be,
on the morrow.
I wish to see,
how it will play
on lifes stage,
at the break of day.
See the show
of my life,
in front mine eyes
when my window brights.
At the dawn of the moon,
I will dream,
think of what will be,
and then just wait and see.
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DragonLuvSong
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2004-11-02 20:00:52]
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Re: Tell Me The Future
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by hoist1atca on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:23:55 PM AEST
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I like the poem-
If you wish to see the future you must find your destiny first.
Looking into the tomorrows to come will leave nothing to chance-
Without opportunity beyond today all else ill fade into yesterday.
Joe |
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Re: Tell Me The Future
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by subgenius on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:15:58 PM AEST
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| I like how you refer to a lot of life as something like a play, or an act. It definetely feels like life is sometimes a sitcom |
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