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Will it be you?
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:08:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Ballpoint pens press deeply into my skin.
Nothing to hold me back.
The safety pin that once help together my sanity snaps.
From a mezmorizing dream.
Scissors from my past, haunt my eager soul.
A haze of crimson lures me closer.
The razor blade of questions to be answered is overwhelming.
Do not turn away.
Running against the winds of bitter-sweet revenge.
Describe the scene of impressions to me later.
Leaves crushing under my feet, like shards of glass.
No one quite understands.
The darkness seeps like smoke from under the door.
If I fall.
A maze of all the looming pain.
Who will be there to catch me.
A hopeful ray of rescuers reach out a broken heart.
Will it be you?
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2ndChance
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2004-11-02 20:08:59]
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Re: Will it be you?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:26:09 PM AEST
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wow awesome write and i see what you mean its like 2 poems in one .. great job
Peace and hope
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Re: Will it be you?
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by shisgirl on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:29:17 PM AEST
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| I LIKED THE WAY YOU PUT THAT TOGETHER.... NICELY WRITTEN |
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Re: Will it be you?
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by LiquidChaos on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:31:03 PM AEST
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| Neato...it's awesome either way...I wanna go try that... |
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