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My Rain
Contributed by
tedhuggablebare
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:21:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The rain continues to fall around me.
A reminder of you that surrounds me.
Wishing for the day to hold you.
Allowing my love struck heart to show you
...that you have become my soul.
Brighter than the rainbow's pot of gold.
I will still be here waiting for you,
while standing in the rain to feel you!
Copyright ©
tedhuggablebare
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2004-11-02 22:21:54]
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Re: My Rain
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by Row on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:10:23 AM AEST
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| short and sweet, its very nice |
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Re: My Rain
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by THORN on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 07:07:04 AM AEST
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| GREAT! |
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Re: My Rain
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by RhythmBndt on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:32:22 AM AEST
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| Beautifully done :) |
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Re: My Rain
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by -Lord-Vince-Black- on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:17:48 AM AEST
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It's ok...
Have a nice life,
Lord Vince Black |
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