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Addict
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:30:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A kiss ever-fading angelic yet deadly lustrous and beautiful forever ineptly the cursed taste lingers on my lips mocking and haunting suffocating and haunting always bleeding flooding and seething choke me sweetly I'm dying yet breathing
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Re: Addict
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:32:36 AM AEST (User
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mmmm that was brilliant, great write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Addict
(User Rating: 1 ) by Red_October on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:07:12 AM AEST (User
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Another good one. Very emotional spiral to the end. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Addict
(User Rating: 1 ) by bonita2689 on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:22:25 AM AEST (User
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revision: suffocating and taunting... oops sorry
-Kristin |
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Re: Addict
(User Rating: 1 ) by girish on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:15:01 PM AEST (User
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you are dying but breathing only because of the initial kiss you got it`s never fading
nice write |
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