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Sacrifice
Contributed by
bonita2689
on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 09:08:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A hollowed existence
becomes my wicked destiny
A lurking shadow
my only enemy
Abuse me softly
As I lie profusly
Magnify ineptly
struggle inanely
the blade is my edge
twisted and taunting
abuse it wisely
it's victim sits quietly
buring flesh
struck with change
a sick and grueling friendship
bloody insane
withered and weak
you choke me
im loathing
yet so provoking
I surrender
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bonita2689
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2004-11-03 09:08:58]
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Re: Sacrifice
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:03:29 AM AEST
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very well written., sad write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by Red_October on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:02:43 AM AEST
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| Very descriptive, intense write. You are good with words. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by Sirena_Degana on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:21:00 AM AEST
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wickedly insane!!!!
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:16:28 PM AEST
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| i have cut my self so many times with that same blade i do not even bleed anymore it is all a waste not comfort there wanting to stop but if i do inside i will rought |
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