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Messy White
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:51:58 AM in AEST
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Life without you is raw
not harmony
or pieces to empty rhythm
I turn
investigated fully
making wild smears of screams absurd
Meanest shard black they see
A psychedelic picture of me
Drug and balance
smoke from time
Electric passion drunk
on words that I write
It creates art that only I would like
with you as my music
on a canvas messy white
Sometimes surreal
Never angry appear
Deeply to feel
the things that I fear
Days are time
from smoke that I turn
into wasted art
of passion absurd
Drug and balance
are empty as life
With you as my music
on a canvas messy white
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Red_October
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2004-11-03 10:51:58]
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Re: Messy White
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:05:14 AM AEST
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aww Tiffany, this is a very emotional write, you have written it with such style, great flow,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Messy White
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by Sirena_Degana on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:16:49 AM AEST
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Beautiful use of words...
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: Messy White
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by bonita2689 on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:39:31 AM AEST
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| A colorful exlposion of words... I love your writing style! |
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Re: Messy White
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by RhythmBndt on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:40:24 AM AEST
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| Deep & thought provoking. Great work :) |
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Re: Messy White
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by Nardo on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:09:03 PM AEST
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WOW!
I don't know what to say but the visions of beauty and chaos fill my mind.
GREAT JOB! |
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Re: Messy White
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:05:56 PM AEST
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| wonderful... |
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