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physical beauty
Contributed by
RavenousDesire
on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The structure of your face
traps me in amazement
My heart begins to race
faster and faster the pace
Your beauty astonishes me
It's you, no one else
the feeling abolishes me
from where sanity dwells
Your eyes so deep
Your lips so full
through my skull
these images seap
Frozen by your presence
Entwined in your essence
Your physical beauty
is impossible to hide
but it cannot compare
to your significance
inside
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RavenousDesire
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2002-11-19 01:00:00]
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Re: physical beauty
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 01:11:08 AM AEST
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Absolutely breathtaking, This is
so beautiful, i really enjoyed this one
it's so full of love and beauty, it's deep
Beautiful expression of your feelings
Thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed
readint this. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: physical beauty
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by Eastway on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 01:48:42 AM AEST
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| Very nice. It sums up the emotions really well for me. I particularly liked the ending and the message that beauty is more than skin deep. A love poem with more than usual to offer. |
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