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She'll Be There For You
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:13:28 PM in AEST
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I remember when I took her in
For her first day of school
The way that I felt when I thought to myself
Man, you must look like a fool
And I tried to hide a tear in my eye
As I wished you could be there
When I tried to explain the source of my pain
She said she saw you sittin on the stairs
( and you told her to say )
Youre doin a fine job Daddy
But dont give up just yet
She knows how much you miss her
And Im not gonna let you forget
She says that shes been waitin for you
But there are things you still have to do
So dont worry Daddy, when youre done
Shell be there for you
Then she started askin questions
That I knew nothin about
I did my best to answer her
It was clear she still had her doubts
Daddy, why do I feel this way
Is there something I can take
That will make it go away
I threw up my hands in frustration
And she heard your voice
( and you told her to say )
Youre doin a fine job Daddy
But dont give up just yet
She knows that you cant see or hear her
But Im not gonna let you forget
She says that shes been waitin for you
But there are things you still have to do
So dont worry Daddy, when youre done
Shell be there for you
She started college a few years ago
Where it was gonna take her
She just didnt know
We our spent nights arguing what was best
As her search for knowledge
Continued its quest
Then spring turned to summer and summer into fall
She carried out her things as I stood in the hall
( she saw you in the mirror on my bed room wall )
She said youre doin a fine job Daddy
But dont give up just yet
She has always been here for you
She told me not to let you forget
I know that shes still waitin for you
Theres still something you have yet to do
But dont worry Daddy, when youre done
Shell be there for you
Now it seems like yesterday
I stood by her side to give her away
She caught that same
Look in my eye
She took my hand as we walked down the aisle
Squeezed it softly then said with a smile
If only Mom could be here today
I know just what shed say
Shed say youre doin a fine job Daddy
But youre not done just yet
And I know if we could only see her
Shed be filled with pride, I bet
Im certain shes still waitin for you
To finish what youre here to do
Dont worry Daddy, when youre done
Shell be there for you
Our new grandson lies sleeping
Just a few rooms away
She sits by my side and doesnt quite know
Where shes supposed to stay
So caught up in her emotions, from elation into gloom
She doesnt seem to notice as you walk into the room
I lift a trembling hand to the side of her head
Now its my turn to tell her, what you just said
You said, Youve done a fine job Hun
And I just want to let you know
The sweetest gift Ive ever had
Was bein able to watch her grow
Baby, Im proud of you
But now its time to let her go
Just put your hand in mine
And Darlin let me
Lead you
Home
( Authors note: I have revised, edited, and rewritten this so many times over the last six years, I think I'm finally ready for some feedback ... is it done yet ? )
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:28:42 PM AEST
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| get out the tissue..a tear jerker..don't throw it away..it's wonderfullllllll |
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:33:35 PM AEST
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without a doubt this has got to be one fo the nest i have ever read whilst being on YPDC this is amazing, 5/5
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 02:37:55 PM AEST
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*Sobs!* This is the most heartfelt poem I have ever laid eyes on!! A real tear-jerker! A truly touching piece, Scott... This must have been so difficult for you to write. Don't change a thing! It's perfect, as are all of your works... Enchanting, sorrowful... All in all, a magnificent write! Very emotional. Love it. I bet your daughter would love it, too. Thank you so much for sharing, cheri. I enjoyed it. All my love! Forever,
~*FleurdeSang*~ |
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:34:32 PM AEST
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I have nothing left to cry.
It's an excellent work.
It really makes you keep reading.
And for a long write
that is very important.
Although I wonder what
the longest version ran.
I'm still a little dazed by
the epic quality of it all.
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 05:50:29 PM AEST
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Naz, I think it's done! Beautifully done. Very emotional ... I can feel the love in this, Naz. No wonder, the tears.
A true work of the soul....
Willofree |
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 06:50:26 PM AEST
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Yes, my friend, it's complete. There is nothing I can say to let you know how deeply this touched my heart. This reader shares your tears and is proud of you.
Very, very, well written.
Larry |
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by Lionel on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 06:53:46 AM AEST
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| I think it's excellent; makes the reader tear up too. |
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 05:46:00 PM AEST
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This poem was amazing...yeah, and a tissue would definitly help...really awesome job here
Mason |
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 05:10:17 PM AEST
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| thats a really amazing peice...your very talented..looks like all the rewritting and the working on it for 6 years definatly paid off..well done |
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by critterhideaway on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:00:05 PM AEST
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| Tears for sure as I relate to raising a grandson without his daddy, Very beautiful!!! |
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by _Raspberry_ on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:55:04 AM AEST
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| It's finished! This is such a beautiful and touching write. It explains the past behind it without going into too much gruesome detail. Very uplifting! I was crying, but my heart was smiling. |
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Re: She'll Be There For You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:34:41 AM AEST
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wow....................wow
Is speechless.............good nazzy...very good!
I've always felt each of is here for a reason, wouldn't it be nice to know what it is?...sigh...yes this is good! |
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