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I can
Contributed by
lovesucks
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:54:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can see
I can be
free
can't pretend
can amend
I must defend
I can't foget
can permit
must admit
can accept
can't reject
must object
can believe
can't decieve
must achieve
I can be
I can see
I can be free
to be me
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Re: I can
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:56:56 PM AEST
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to be free is something that we all want, to achieve it is an amazing thing, i hope that you are one who can acheive it, great write,
takcare
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Re: I can
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 02:59:33 PM AEST
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wow,ur right confusing,i had to read it accouple of times before i caught on,i agree with pixie,great write,keep'em comen
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Re: I can
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by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 05:46:54 PM AEST
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Nicely done, very original with deep concept. Very good!
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Re: I can
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by Catalina on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:30:51 AM AEST
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Awsome! So real & on target. I am there right now. Thanks for sharing.
~Catalina~ |
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Re: I can
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:49:43 AM AEST
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| Wow this is very good. You can be free to be you |
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Re: I can
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by destinysseduction on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 04:23:34 PM AEST
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in its brevity these words spoke volumes...great write.
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