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Blood Ruby (FINISHED IT)
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 05:17:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pleasantly defined,
magickaly entwined.
Blessedly placed.
Wonderfully cased.
A treasure in my arms.
A ruby from blood.
Shining endlessly
with an eye of a tear.
A precious jewel.
Shined to a crimson line.
Traded over time to time.
Faded by oil,
of wrinkled hands.
Dented creases,
and unknown lands.
Explored through destiny,
and faith betold.
Truth has found it's
precious creation.
And laid it in the sand,
to grow.
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
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2004-11-03 17:17:24]
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Re: Blood Ruby (FINISHED IT)
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:34:42 AM AEST
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| wow, this is awesome!!!! |
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Re: Blood Ruby (FINISHED IT)
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:45:19 AM AEST
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brilliant , Im so glad that you finished it :)
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Blood Ruby (FINISHED IT)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 11:46:21 PM AEST
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| Sounds pretty. "Shined to a crimson line" is an unusual and pretty line. Cheers! |
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