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Destiny's Maze
Contributed by
avanottingham
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:58:04 AM in AEST
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Take my love away from you
Sick and tired of your abuse
Life's not fair and you're not kind
Mirrors of these empty times
The lies are thick and you will cry
Rivers for those souls sipped dry
And I will watch as you relate
To the deafening roars of angry fate
The sun is cold, the moon has tried
To fill the stars with human light
But memories are what came to pass
Our human faith is gone at last
What was true began to fade
Love met death in shallow shade
The rain has finally drowned the earth
Your convictions have lost all worth
Take me now where I belong
Where angels sing their final songs
And fall away to ash and dust
Fading with their mangled trust
Once I tried to sympathize
Stared into your glassened eyes
But cold bit hard and froze your heart
Bitterness played her final part
Scornful, vengeful, out of place
Emotions sent to kill a race
Lonliness, though, was the best
A prison of our own request
Chilling pain our one true friend
It's emptiness was brought to bed
Hope gave up and led the way
Through Destiny's angry twisted maze
A world of endless vixen tongue
Temptation was our lethal drug
Our mask were bound, our sins weren't shy
Humanity fell to it's demise
I wonder now if we had made
A difference in our every day
Could Destiny have had found her peace
Whole again, would she let us be?
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avanottingham
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2004-11-04 07:58:04]
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Re: Destiny's Maze
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:15:59 AM AEST
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wow that was amazingly written, great flow
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Destiny's Maze
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:57:52 AM AEST
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There is nothing "long" about that. Trust me ... this comes from someone who does tend to get very caught up in words.
The flow and rhyme is fabulous
"Chilling pain our one true friend
It's emptiness was brought to bed
Hope gave up and led the way
Through Destiny's angry twisted maze"
That is my favorite stanza
Naznythian ~ |
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Re: Destiny's Maze
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by Catalina on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:14:54 AM AEST
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| I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! Beautiful. Thanks for sharing... Keep writing |
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