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Darkness Falls on the University
Contributed by
travisk
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:04:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I swear I love this place at night
Bathed in sadness and orange light
Wondering if they chose that color to spite
Casting those who pass in a red, not white
With careful steps, and books in hand
A relaxed pace on man-fused sand
Wondering what they all might say
When my flesh is cold, and lips are grey
An approaching figure sucks in a fiery splendor
Letting off a similar orange, the cigarettes render
Wondering why they possess such a habit
Why their eyes show me a fox, and they a rabbit
Nostrils taste a withered spring divine
The air brings pleasure as breath resigns
Wondering who the coming sun shines for
I know it shines for me -- no more
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2004-11-04 10:04:36]
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Re: Darkness Falls on the University
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by mysticpoet on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:08:44 AM AEST
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HI travisk ,
I read your poem several times. I can picture in my mind the imagery in your poem.
Good write |
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Re: Darkness Falls on the University
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:09:54 AM AEST
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intresting write, good work,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Darkness Falls on the University
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by justjonesy on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 03:32:05 AM AEST
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| I love it.....one of the best ones ive read so far imagery-wise....keep it up |
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