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Shot Down Again
Contributed by
Tripod
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:37:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Another day filled with anxiety,
Unaware of the torment I will soon feel.
Approaching the girl I find so dandy,
But when she say’s “No,” it seems so unreal.
And there I am left standing,
Disbelieving, I’ve been shot down again.
I walk away with my head hanging low,
And still not sure what I’ve done wrong,
I try my best and act like myself,
But it seems to me that here I don’t belong.
And there I am left standing,
Disbelieving, I’ve been shot down again.
I swear to myself I will continue to try,
But my mind tells me to stop.
I want to spare the pain on my life I apply,
However, I am stubborn and of course I will not.
And there I am left standing,
Disbelieving, I’ve been shot down again.
A month has passed, it seems more like a year,
But now another girl I fancy comes to me.
To me she say’s, “at my door I wish you would appear,”
And to her my love I am still give.
And there I am left standing,
Disbelieving, I won’t be shot down again.
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Tripod
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2004-11-04 10:37:53]
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Re: Shot Down Again
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:43:17 AM AEST
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fingers crossed, hope you dont get shot down again, I hope that you find a girl who deserves your love, a good write,
pixie xx |
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