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This emptiness inside...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:02:04 PM in AEST
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Theres this emptiness that sometimes prevails,
As I wander,
I wander under self-doubt
It pulls me under such an unbearable weight,
Arresting my freedom
Choking quietly my life
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FleurdeSang
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2004-11-04 15:02:04]
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Re: This emptiness inside...
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:22:49 PM AEST
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short but very powerfully written,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: This emptiness inside...
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 04:06:49 PM AEST
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It gave me a suffocating feeling..I was going to make a smart remark about a quickie..before I got to the poem?
then when I read the poem ..my smart remark was taken away by the weight of the poetry. |
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Re: This emptiness inside...
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 09:35:30 AM AEST
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| Short maybe, yet written with powerful image bursting free, a feeling of stale air, struggling for frredom, intense write and a beautiful read, cool poem. |
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Re: This emptiness inside...
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by midian on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:00:51 AM AEST
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Wow it is short, but nonethelacking in quality
an enjoyable write
~x~ Carly ~x~ |
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Re: This emptiness inside...
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:34:08 AM AEST
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You epressed this so very well short but speaks volumes
Superb
LoveSweetangelukxxxx |
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