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Yo-Yo
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:20:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My moods are just like a yo-yo,
Will I be here or there, who knows?
One minute Im up the next I am down
Today Ill be the jester; tomorrow Ill wear a crown.
My life has been such a bumpy ride,
For a brain I have scrambled eggs inside,
My hearts taken such a beating,
But it will take some damn hard defeating.
I am quite resilient when it comes to stress,
As I was born into this world already a mess,
I will cry but my tears they will fade,
But my feelings in public are never displayed.
Up & down is how my life has always been,
So many things that I shouldnt have seen.
My colours change just like the weather,
It seems I am always at the end of my tether.
I never really know my true feelings,
As my mood swings can be very deceiving,
I think I am happy but then realise I am not,
I believe Im stable then totally lose the plot.
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pixie
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2004-11-04 15:20:08]
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Re: Yo-Yo
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:33:23 PM AEST
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such a great write,i am aware of the dtruggles u go through,i feel the same way,i asked my foster mother y and she said its the way life is 1 day we'll get through this,i'm 16 years old and i thought my feelings would be much clearer to me and everybody else but no change as accured,good luck in the future,keep up the great work
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Re: Yo-Yo
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:48:38 PM AEST
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when i was younger ( in the good ol'days!) my thoughts and feelings were so confused,
trust me it does get better! good poem.
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Re: Yo-Yo
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 04:03:26 PM AEST
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I love this line: believe I’m stable then totally lose the plot.
I think it's hilarious...just loved it!!!! |
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Re: Yo-Yo
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 04:42:55 PM AEST
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Awww pixie
this is an awsome write. |
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Re: Yo-Yo
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:02:00 PM AEST
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| Pixie, You are such a treasure to both the site and especially your reading fans. I always get this calmness come over me when I get to read your fine poetry. It is so wonderful to have this chance to know you and be exposed to such a talented poet who inspires all of us. I know I have said this before but again I want to Thank You for sharing yourself and your Great poetry with myself and all of the other readers. We are so Proud of you and Honored to have you here with all of us. Your Dear Friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: Yo-Yo
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by faithmairee on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 06:32:15 PM AEST
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| a very heart-felt brilliant poem...way to go, pixie...i loved this! |
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Re: Yo-Yo
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:04:43 PM AEST
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A litle medical info a lot of people are not aware of.
SAD (Seasonal Affective Disorder) Seasonal affective disorder is a recurrent mood disorder with a fall-winter onset and a spring-summer remission (also known as SAD). Light therapy helps to alleviate symptoms of SAD.
Google it. It really truly is a disorder that can seriously affect moods.
Rita |
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Re: Yo-Yo
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by venkat on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:53:16 AM AEST
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| Very brilliant write..but those ups and downs are common in many of our lives..dearest girl..love and hugs...:-) venkat |
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Re: Yo-Yo
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by avanottingham on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:27:36 AM AEST
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I like this because I can relate, moreso, I think that almost everyone can relate to it.
The impression I get most from this is confusion. I mean that as in an internal emotion, not a logical wall. As in wondering why you don't know yourself.
I think you did a wonderful job of expressing yourself in an honest direct manner. =)
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