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Total Exhaustion
Contributed by
gherkin
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:14:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm tierd now
Sick and tierd of it,
Worn to the bone,
Stretched so thin.
I'm invisible to you,
My needs
Go uncared for,
My pleads
Ignored
To curl up tight;
Seel my eyelids
With wax from
A dimming candle,
It's flame shrinking.
One last flicker,
That'd be the way
To break free;
To simply lay
Down and be.
Copyright ©
gherkin
... [
2004-11-04 17:14:07]
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Re: Total Exhaustion
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by pixie on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:15:03 PM AEST
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think we all feel like this sometimes hun, a great write, hope you feel better soon,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Total Exhaustion
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by taryn on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:33:09 PM AEST
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| good write. I can relate to how you feel ;) take care. |
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Re: Total Exhaustion
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:49:16 PM AEST
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I really liked this one.
And I feel the same way, sadly.
--Mothy |
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Re: Total Exhaustion
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:07:41 PM AEST
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I thought it would be a good idea, to read another poem of your's and I'm glad I did.
I love the style of this piece, it's.. the icing on the cake *smiles*...
I will read one more. |
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