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Battle Of The Mind
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:04:34 PM in AEST
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Confusion is the chosen name for my battle-
As I find that my life is filled with chaos-
Yet I know that the fault is to be mine alone-
For the trouble I have caused by my own hand…
Foolishness is the steed, which I ride into battle-
As this trait I have come to know so well-
For the stupidity of my actions are of my own choosing-
Yet the craziness tends to help me retain my sanity…
Arrogance is the armor that I wear into battle-
For pride is nothing more than inordinate self esteem-
As hubris is an emotion that is always overbearing-
Yet I wear my armor to protect my inadequate superiority…
Insanity is the reason behind my battles-
As the madness of life has mixed the man I am-
Given irrationality to the process of my thoughts-
Left me standing alone in this lunacy that I now call myself…
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2004-11-04 19:04:34]
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Re: Battle Of The Mind
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:24:14 PM AEST
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this was really cool....i liked it....great write
Lots of Love
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Re: Battle Of The Mind
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by ladydp2000 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:41:08 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write! I do love your poem very much.Very self-explanatory and full of so many emotions too.Thank you for sharing it with us. |
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Re: Battle Of The Mind
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:00:03 PM AEST
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Just blame it all on age and go out and enjoy life and love and live to the fullest. Find someone who completes you and live to fulfill their life as they will be doing for you. Age does have its perks! lol
Rita |
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Re: Battle Of The Mind
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 09:47:29 AM AEST
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| awesome and powerfully strong write, full of images and feelings cool poem. |
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Re: Battle Of The Mind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:40:30 PM AEST
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Joe, this was so very creative. I enjoyed it immensely.
I think we share something here...
But life goes on and it only gets better. You know that, right? :~)
Peace.
~Breezy |
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