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Roller coaster of love
Contributed by
tWiStLe
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:35:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Why is it that when we love we get hurt?
Isn't love meant to make us feel happy?
Not leave us lying face down in the dirt?
Love takes you on ups and downs,
Like a rollercaoster ride,
although many just provide the frowns.
The operator of my rollercoaster must be gone,
now just a simple star,
cuz my ride just keeps plummeting,
it just won't stop.
At a top speed i feel like i'm drowing,
In nothing but blood and tears.
You can't pull a halt leaver,
You can't even reverse
by that time everything it too far gone.
Everyone tells me it will soon be over,
But i know it won't be.
There is still no operator,
noone to help lead me into the right direction,
the future that i want.
So i keep doing rounds of the past,
holding onto what i once had.
That beautifull feeling,
The soft touch,
The meaningfull kissess,
It still hurts too much.
I just can't get over it,
I can't build that bridge to help me,
So i just keep wishig,
Hoping,
Dreaming,
and clinging tightly,
because i hate the reality i should be facing.
Copyright ©
tWiStLe
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2004-11-04 19:35:17]
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Re: Roller coaster of love
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:40:18 PM AEST
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Wow, it's painfull but I can so much relate to this. Thing is jus neva give up on yourself.
Hang tuff and u r in my prayers.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: Roller coaster of love
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by unforgiven on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:33:08 AM AEST
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heya huni........i know how u feel in this poem....everytime u think u've found the real thing of love...sumthing happens that makes u hav doubts....like there's no love widout tears. lovely yet sad poem but it's one of my favourites out of urs so far!
luv u sweety and will always be there for u...mwa
~becca~ |
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