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Pain Is Forever
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:50:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pain is forever,
It has a sinister hold on your soul
Binding itself to you, it holds you to suffering
Not wanting to let go,
It keeps to you like a lost child
Pain,
It comes in different ways
The first wound is the grave,
Abysmal in the flowing blood
The blood floods you, like liquid hot fear
Forever,
This forever seems eternally long
You want to break away from the eye of time
Disappear into welcoming darkness
Pain is forever, holding on to you
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Crimson_Rose
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2004-11-04 20:50:58]
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Re: Pain Is Forever
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:55:51 PM AEST
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| what kind of pain we talkin' here? it's true when you're in pain it does seem forever..and on the other hand, when you're havin a really good time... the time just goes too fast..what's up with that anyway..good write. |
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Re: Pain Is Forever
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:55:02 PM AEST
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| fantastic pain. pain is forever only if you let it be. |
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Re: Pain Is Forever
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:22:57 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Pain Is Forever
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:33:03 AM AEST
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hope that one day you can break free from your pain, i am still struggling with mine, very powerful and emotional write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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