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Alone
Contributed by
taryn
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:38:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I sit here and watch,
admire all of the love.
Seeing them hold hands,
seeing them happy.
I feel so alone.
I need someone too.,
someone to have,
someone who understands me that way.
But its not that easy,
the feelings have to go both ways.
So for now,
Ill sit here and wait,
alone.
Copyright ©
taryn
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2004-11-04 21:38:21]
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Re: Alone
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:43:38 PM AEST
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I know the feelings.
Very good writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Alone
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:49:04 PM AEST
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I hear ya! great poem.
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Re: Alone
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:47:16 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Alone
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:04:40 PM AEST
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wow this is a great write of feeling lonley for a short poem.. you can feel the sadness.. I understand how you feel. I think we all have felt this way.. don't worry someone for you will come
Peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Alone
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:24:32 PM AEST
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| I think you capture what all of us feel at times..great write. |
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Re: Alone
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by Sholdershy on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:10:42 AM AEST
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| Very Well Written |
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Re: Alone
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:28:35 AM AEST
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Awwww *hugs* this is so sad and emotionally written, very deep and touching,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Alone
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:35:57 AM AEST
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| Beautifullly sensitive, sad and visual, full of emotions gentle and pure I hoe you do find what it is your heart truely seeks. |
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Re: Alone
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by flash_16 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:47:53 PM AEST
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| hey! your not alone. a lot of us are going through the same thing.....im always here for you.but this is a good poem.good job beautiful!im still ur best friend |
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