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Broken
Contributed by
Midian
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:49:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Today you left and i felt broke
i lost all words and sense of hope
so much pain coursing through my heart
i wish that we were not apart
so alone i feel without you near me
so lost and afraid im blind i cant see
you dont realise that i need you to breathe
but when i tell you this with anger you seeth
my heart is torn when im not with you
i love you so much, i just cant bare that were through
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Midian
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2004-11-04 21:49:35]
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Re: Broken
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:03:31 PM AEST
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wow there is alot of hurt in this little poem.. its a good poem and its expresses the heartbreak in it well.. great job I hope you are feeling better now
Peace and hope
*JENNA* |
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Re: Broken
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by DesperateSoul on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:52:41 PM AEST
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This one ie excellent!!! I went all the way from Ca to OK to try and make my dream of finding true love real and it didn't work out...
I sent this poem to him!!! Thankz!! Keep writing and keep posting!! *~Dana~* |
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Re: Broken
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by Lilbabe on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 10:35:41 AM AEST
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lovely write...depressing, but in a good way. wait does that make sense? well it does to me lol
i really enjoyed this. |
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