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Contributed by
Red_October
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:44:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So walking alone outside, it's damp and quiet and I start reaching through time.
All that was blocked, all that was lost, and none of it rhymed.
Subjectively, I watched myself lacking reason.
I kept thinking about other other's and would randomly please them.
Speaking not of myself but those who crossed my paths,
I learned to distinguish the cries and the laughs.
I felt not unobjectionable when chaos abounded...
Rules were my enemies upon lies compounded.
Lies to myself and thereby to everyone else.
Oddly smiling about cutting myself.
Whilst days were passing like broken glass
I knew none of the people would last.
It was a portrait self-defined in loathing that hurt
but changing the players seemed somehow worse.
Walking static in random motion
was picturing girl inhaling destruction
like nobody's business.
Copyright ©
Red_October
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2004-11-05 18:44:54]
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Re: Random
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by Sirena_Degana on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:26:52 PM AEST
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oh awesome..this is really good for something "random"....lol...very good...
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: Random
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:25:47 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: Random
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:27:15 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: Random
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 12:05:57 AM AEST
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| wow, i love this, awesome write!!! |
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Re: Random
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by pixie on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 06:59:42 AM AEST
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a very good write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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