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Everything or Nothing
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:51:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Tell me boy
Do you think that I am
Still obsessed with you
Tell me baby
Do you honestly believe
You're the best that I can do
Look at me boy
Do you notice the feelings
My eyes reveal have changed
Look at me baby
Do you honestly believe
That just cause of you my whole life will be rearranged
And I've been waiting for you
Never getting a chance to show
Everything or nothing that I could give
So you should know
The present is all I need
Hear me boy
And listen to
The wind of change whistling in the air
Hear me baby
And watch me letting go
Cause no one cares for what is fair
Kiss me boy
Can you taste the indifference
Something has been over for so long
Kiss me baby
And keep on wondering
If you were the one who taught me how to stay strong
And I've been waiting for you
Never getting a chance to show
Everything or nothing that I could give
So you should know
The present is all I need
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
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2004-11-05 18:51:55]
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Re: Everything or Nothing
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by Red_October on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:56:20 PM AEST
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| Good poem, but I can't grasp whether you want him or you don't. I have to read it again...let the ink flow! Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Everything or Nothing
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:08:07 PM AEST
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yeah sorry about that
It's probably "The present is all I need" line. I had "believe" instead of "need" at first, then I read it over, saw that this word was used enough times before, and I changed it, without reading it over once more. What I meant was that I only believe in what I see right now in front of me, not what I was blinded by in the past.
I'll be more careful next time lol |
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Re: Everything or Nothing
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by Sirena_Degana on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:42:00 PM AEST
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this one is really good...sounds like a song! and a good farewell one too...it's like a girl's anthem....it's awesome ...i wish more people would right more of these.and it sounds like u got a heck of alot stronger too....this is awesome!!! GOOD JOB!!!
blessed be..stay strong
sirena |
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Re: Everything or Nothing
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:17:54 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Everything or Nothing
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by iloveyoux12 on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 02:56:34 PM AEST
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| this is ghood :) |
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