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My last words
Contributed by
stonedraider23
on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:56:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When you leave me
You leave my love too
I'm left here wanting you
Needing you, missing you
Kissing you, loving you
Whats left to live for
I'm sitting here
With tears in my eyes
Writting you one last time
And loading my gun
What did I say
What did I do
Why couldn't you tell me
Wht did you leave
Did you not love me
I hope my blood don't cover my last words
I hope you're happy now
I love you
Copyright ©
stonedraider23
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2004-11-05 18:56:08]
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Re: My last words
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by Sirena_Degana on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:57:20 PM AEST
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oh this is sad..good write..
blessed be
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Re: My last words
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 07:22:28 PM AEST
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aww such a sad and emotional write!is there anything i can do to help u?i hope 1 day u see,great write so powerful
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Re: My last words
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:57:10 PM AEST
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