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Unwanted Birth
Contributed by
willow_Tara72002
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Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:45:28 AM in AEST
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I put on a happy face
Around friends and family
I smile and laugh
I play the part to make them think Im happy
But honesty deep down im crying
My soul is dying
I wont let any of them see
How i really feel, must remain a secret
I celebrate my birthday today
Everyone seems so happy for me
But inside I wish i was never born
I dont want to live in this world anymore
I dread waking up everyday to this life
I hate knowing the truth,
But do everything to know it
I hate having lived another year of my life
I hate pretending, making jokes, acting a certain way
I just dont want to wake up anymore
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Re: Unwanted Birth
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 10:10:32 PM AEST
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Me, me, me, me, me. I'll bet you have a better life than half the people on earth. Be concerned for someone else for awhile, It'll make you feel better. Other-wise, a pretty good poem. And, God bless you is my prayer.
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Re: Unwanted Birth
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 03:56:21 AM AEST
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| awesome, i think its gud ur venting ur feeling thru poetry, no matter what other commenters have said. |
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Re: Unwanted Birth
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 05:43:40 AM AEST
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Aww this is sad, if it is your birthday today Happy Birthday and dont be to sad ok.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Unwanted Birth
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by DamentedSuicide on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:45:46 AM AEST
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But honesty deep down im crying
My soul is dying
I wont let any of them see
How i really feel, must remain a secret
Know how you feel
its been my wish for years
never to know another one
~~~Raven~~~ |
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