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Rinse
Contributed by
llamaluver
on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:49:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I stand outside in the rain
My dark hair plastered to my head
The raindrops
They mingle with my tears
I cry because
Earlier that morning
I told him it was over
This abuse had to stop
And he just looked at me
With his bright green eyes
That were filled with false tears
And said
"But I love you"
At that I almost gave in
But then I saw his fist
And I knew not to take it anymore
So I ran
Now I am in the rain
Letting the cool fresh drops
Rinse my love for him
And my pain
Away
Copyright ©
llamaluver
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2004-11-06 11:49:42]
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Re: Rinse
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by PoetChick on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 01:00:17 PM AEST
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| Good for you. Stop the abuse. |
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Re: Rinse
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by Drapes on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 05:42:42 PM AEST
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Good for you for being strong & doing what's right. It takes a lot to stand up to someone like that. Great write!
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