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Words Upon My Lips
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The value of my comments and the words upon my lips,
Shows me clearly how you feel and the scale how it tips.
If my compliments mean nothing, my voice just empty air,
Then I know you have no interest and you really just dont care
So forgive me if Im wounded but your shot was straight and true,
Your denial brought me to my knees and you never even knew.
So let me tell you one last time how youre so beautiful to see,
And once more you can deny it, showing you dont care for me.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: Words Upon My Lips
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 09:20:08 PM AEST
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You got to stop making me cry
like this, i don't have enough kleenex
tissue for this stuff..This is absolutely
beautiful...i enjoyed this alot, Thanks
for sharing it.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Words Upon My Lips
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by juliette on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 11:27:13 PM AEST
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Once again, I love your poem. I so enjoy reading your work. Thanks for sharing.
*juliette |
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Re: Words Upon My Lips
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 11:50:23 PM AEST
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| Beautiful,just beautiful! Christina |
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Re: Words Upon My Lips
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by Jbounce85 on
Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 10:43:04 PM AEST
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| I really loved your poem! I thought your words were beautiful! |
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