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Isolation
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
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Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:37:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Isolation
Watch as it resumes
Isolation
Watch as it consumes.
Rearing its ominous form
In such a malevolent way
Destroying everything in its path
Sparing nothing but dismay.
Isolation
Watch as it resumes
Isolation
Watch as it consumes.
Spinning a crystal web of deceit
Capturing false emotions within
Devouring them as treats,
Never giving in.
Isolation
Watch as it resumes
Isolation
Watch as it consumes.
Fracturing spectrums of light
Inducing uncertainties
Its omnipotent wrath,
Increasing anxiety.
Isolation
Watch as it resumes
Isolation
Watch as it consumes.
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cuddlytiger17
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2004-11-06 17:37:34]
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Re: Isolation
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:44:14 PM AEST
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Wow, this is beautifully written . . . chilling, and I can identify-- sort of more than I'd like to. Heh.
Anyhow, great job, you wrote this really well-- and I know just how awful it can feel; hope things start looking up for you and soon.
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Re: Isolation
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:51:16 PM AEST
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Excellent use of repetition.
Nice work, keep writing.
Very promising Poet!
--Mothy |
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Re: Isolation
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by destinyfate on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 06:11:16 PM AEST
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| I like the way you brought the word isolation to life. |
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Re: Isolation
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 09:14:22 PM AEST
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| good write. interesting how some can only be happy in isolation and others would die in it. |
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