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Inadequate Existence
Contributed by
DesperateSoul
on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:52:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Inadequate Existence
I'm wasting my life.
If I ceased to exist,
"Would that be so bad?"
I miss all the
Good things &
Positive times,
i've never had.
I'd rather be alone
in this world and have
absolutely noone there,
So my family wouldn't have
to worry for me,
and complicate thier lives
so much,
with having to care..
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DesperateSoul
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2004-11-06 20:52:44]
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Re: Inadequate Existence
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:38:05 PM AEST
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| awesome, i love it |
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Re: Inadequate Existence
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by Kie-Kie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:25:11 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry...*hugs*
Hope you see the brighter side of life soon
Love YA'll,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Inadequate Existence
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by Onslaught on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 09:15:15 PM AEST
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| Gut gemacht. Well done. I have thought about that myself. And as for your opening description of the poem, I agree, and I don't believe that we truly have free thought in the pure sense of the term. I believe everything we think and do is guided and practically forced by our experiences in childhood and that those experiences give us a very narrow view of options to choose from. Good poem. |
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