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Stellar Views In Your Eyes
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:14:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Stellar views in your eyes
New constellations are mapped
One them is of you and I
Holding hands looking at the sky
These stars can be seen even by daylight
There is no explanation why
Maybe the sun wants to see them too
This sight we cannot deprive any one of
You cant deprive me of your love
We have been through to much for me
Not to have you now like I want you
I want you more than anything
Not just in my bed but in my life and day dreams
You mean more to me than that
Stellar views in your eyes
New galaxies revealed
To me a new place for me to take you
Another thing that just makes you more special
That brings you close to what you want to be
To what I already see in you but you do not
That you are beautiful and envelope me
Like those stellar views in you eyes
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Re: Stellar Views In Your Eyes
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:50:11 PM AEST
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Shazzzaamm! Don't know who u r trying to swoon but ya jus knocked me of f my zone and zapped me into paridise!!!
Mercy lawd dat one dare he's on fire!
Like i said I'm spaced out here with this masterpeice guareenteed to send one to outer space.
Wat planet did u say u live on?
Bedazzled-n-speechless,
emy |
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Re: Stellar Views In Your Eyes
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:13:20 AM AEST
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WOW arent you a romantic lol. This is so written carefully with so much detail. i love it
Hugs,
Jane x |
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