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Glad I Didn't Die
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:19:38 AM in AEST
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I am so glad that I didnt die,
Glad that I didnt say my final goodbye,
I was brought back from the brink of death,
When doctors didnt think I had any fight left.
But I didnt die on that fateful day,
I lived on so in life I could make my way,
If Id have died I wouldnt know Mark,
I would never have found my way out of the dark.
I would never have found my gift of writing,
I am proud that I carried on fighting,
I am especially glad that I have met all of you,
Never is there more a word spoken so true.
I cant believe I tried to end my young life,
I was so close to becoming death's wife.
How selfish could one person possibly be?
I wasnt thinking about my friends or family, but me.
They would have been left behind with such grief,
Never knowing how to find their relief,
I remember the night I took the pills,
I was feeling so very unstable, desperate & ill.
My thoughts were like a very muddy pool,
Behind my decision was the deadliest of fuel,
Alcohol & depression a cocktail Id mixed,
Now thoughts were on death, these thoughts were fixed.
But here I am 3 years later still battling on,
Even though my depression hasnt long gone,
I am fighting out of sheer determination,
On my soul suicide left no desecration.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-07 08:19:38]
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Re: Glad I Didn't Die
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:36:25 AM AEST
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Sweet pixie,
I am glad you didn't die too. What a waste of such a sweet
and passionate mind.
"I would never have found my gift of writing,
I am proud that I carried on fighting"
I am proud of you too!!!! Keep on keeping on girl!
Great poem!
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Re: Glad I Didn't Die
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:56:48 AM AEST
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Pixie, I like this very much. The only "constructive criticism" I can offer is that you need a period after "death's wife," instead of a comma. Oh yeah, and an apostrophe on "death's." Punctuation being the only thing, but only since you asked. :-)
Cheers! |
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Re: Glad I Didn't Die
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:23:34 AM AEST
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you dont 'alf write some powerful stuff pix! well done.
Johnny. |
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Re: Glad I Didn't Die
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by Kie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:47:44 AM AEST
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Keep fighting and I see so much positivity in this poem. You have courage to face your feelings and you pen them exquisitely.
Very high praise for this one Pixie.
Kie |
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Re: Glad I Didn't Die
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 10:09:52 AM AEST
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Oh Pixie...This is such a powerful and yet positive write... Anyone reading it can learn a lesson from it... I am glad that you are around to write it and all your lovely poems that you have been posting....
Hang tough, sweetie....
Hugs and love,
Jenni |
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Re: Glad I Didn't Die
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 10:54:53 AM AEST
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i'm glad you're still here too pixie!
man, your poem has hit me solid. despite the fact that my ex-boyfiend O.Ded no more than 3 months ago, this whole thought of suicide has been collecting inside me for ages...! dep down i'm afraid of doing it and i know that will keep me away from over dose etc. but the fantsasy's i must confess are a huge part of me... |
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Re: Glad I Didn't Die
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by tifrob on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 11:35:21 PM AEST
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It took a very strong person to write this poem. You have a right to be proud of yourself... "You go girl!"
J~ |
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