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The Closed Door
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 11:20:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I feel like in in a shadow, like i cant get of a place in a corner where i lay. I have bruises that wont fade away, i have pain, anger, loss, uncertainy in me. I feared where i lived, i feared my home, my father. Brusies fade father, but the pain remains the same.
Im so scared of him, i've been scared of you my whole-entire life! Im scared of what you might do next, i remember when your fist put mom in her place, how i would be up in my room, crying myself to sleep. Dean always called the police on you, i am in a closed door. It's not easy to forget, all the pain you put us in, all the anger you gave me against you. I have brusies all over, emoitonal and phsyical brusies you put everybody in. Im in a corner in a place where i lay crying, scared, miserable, suicidal, and where i sleep. Im in a closed door......Help me
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Re: The Closed Door
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by pixie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 11:31:50 AM AEST
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a dark and very sad write, written well with lots of emotions,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Closed Door
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by EternalNight4x on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:01:52 PM AEST
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| very dpressing poem but still very good i like darker more depressing poems...well keep it up |
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