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Flames
Contributed by
benjimaddenszwifey
on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 11:57:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You have the eyes that won't see
You have the heart that just keeps on beating
You have a voice that just keeps on hurting
And I hate it all, everything about you
All I wanna do is just scream and KiLL you!!!
But I can't just hide the tears inside so you won't see that
It's my time to go now...
Because I can't let you see
the demons around me
you cant see me standing
Silent and Lonely in the
FLAMES.........
Copyright ©
benjimaddenszwifey
... [
2004-11-07 11:57:57]
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Re: Flames
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:00:50 PM AEST
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i hope that one day your flames will be exstinguised, a sad write, filled with sorrow and sadness,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Flames
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by Drapes on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:03:06 PM AEST
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Oooo thats so good! Great job!
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