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Another World
Contributed by
movax
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:53:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The longer I live, the worse I choke
What's going on, is just some sick joke,
This world we occupy, is such a rank place
Surrounded by evil, sickness and disgust
Filtering through the mire again
All that is proud is increasing sin,
Negative beings evolving the human race
Into people without feeling or grace
Persons once known, automatons now
Acting like, cyclic circus clowns,
How we got to this point in time
Is something I'd really like to find
What is best to do I ask you is
Be brave and strong, or just submit?
Copyright ©
movax
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2004-11-07 13:53:33]
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Re: Another World
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by pixie on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:55:56 PM AEST
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good dark write,great flow,
pixie xx |
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Re: Another World
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 02:39:47 PM AEST
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| wow...this is great |
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Re: Another World
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 02:57:10 PM AEST
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there's one hell of alot of truth in that!
woa!!!!!!!!!
thank god you're not 'one of them too!' hey, it's really good to know!
excellent write by the way! |
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Re: Another World
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:07:27 PM AEST
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| So very very true. It's sad what our worlds become, and what's even sadder, is the fact that not many people care enough to try to change it. You've got to stay "brave and strong," never submit. |
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