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The Girl with no Voice
Contributed by
ZiltzWiltz
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Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:31:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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There once was a girl Who never said a word. Nobody recalled that they ever heard her voice. No one seemed to see her as she walked down the hall. do you really need a voice to be seen?
If you asked anyone that she should have known they couldnt tell you a thing of who she was. No emotion was created for her. she had no way of showing she was real. do you really need a voice to exist?
It wasnt that she had no dreams. The number of her dreams were countless. But they werent shaped well enough to fit in. so she let them stay hidden. do you really need a voice to have friends?
i suppose after she disappeared everything went on just as it had before. no one saw the empty desk. no one felt the lack of her presence. do you really need a voice to be missed?
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Re: The Girl with no Voice
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:39:18 PM AEST (User
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Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net!!
I was that girl.....now you can't get me to shut up....lol... Lovely write...Hope to see more from you.. This gave me lots to think about
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Re: The Girl with no Voice
(User Rating: 1 ) by happybunnyfan on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 12:35:18 AM AEST (User
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i can relate to that. but it was a guy. this guy was in my class and everyone never look at him or even talked to him they just made fun of him. then one day he said he was going to kill himself. he got sent to rehab, but that was last year. no one knows were he is this year.
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Re: The Girl with no Voice
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:48:16 PM AEST (User
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This is very deep, I enjoyed reading it, there are a couply people like that in my school, and everyone makes fun of them but i don't understand why, its rather stupid tho, but Your poem was really good,
~ Great Write ~ |
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