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is what i want
Contributed by
amatt
on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:42:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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one last breath
is what i want to take
one last time with you
is what i want from you
one last smile
is what i want to see
one last fight
is what i want to fight
one last death
is what i dont want to witness
one last crime
is what i dont want to commit
one last tear
is what i want to not fall
one last moment
is what i want from this
one last dream
is what i want to come true
one last
is what i want
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2004-11-07 18:42:06]
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Re: is what i want
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by PixieLovezChrisSchwoerer on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:39:53 AM AEST
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| DANG YOU IS SUICIDAL!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: is what i want
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 06:42:04 PM AEST
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| Not bad. Maybe some capitalizing. Cheers! |
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