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Life is a black tunnel
Contributed by
shadowsofmyheart
on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 07:13:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Running but not getting anywhere.
Im moving, I know.
But so is everyone else
Moving faster then me.
I'm moving forward but not getting anywhere.
Each day is passing fast.
I just cant keep up.
Thats why every day is the same.
Every sky the grayest,
Every moment wasted.
Going forward but still I'm back.
Unidentifiable figures pass me.
I cant see who they really are.
I dont care
I am just running towards him.
Running though the tunnel
He is my light.
The light no one ever reaches.
Only in my dreams ,
do I reach the light at the end of the tunnel,
The black tunnel called life
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shadowsofmyheart
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2004-11-07 19:13:40]
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Re: Life is a black tunnel
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 07:28:14 PM AEST
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| not bad, Ireally like the ending, this is good. |
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Re: Life is a black tunnel
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by Red_October on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:27:57 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. Nice write. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Life is a black tunnel
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 12:58:47 AM AEST
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This is a good poem its composed so well.
Hugs,
Jane |
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