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Numb--
Contributed by
acidicblasphemy
on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 07:19:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Its going to be great
Its going to be fine
Theres never been a problem
The reasons held behind
I cant find my place
Theres no emotion on my face
I think the moments finally come
I pick up the blade
My whole body goes numb
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Re: Numb--
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:53:15 PM AEST
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what you have here is very good.
"It’s going to be great
It’s going to be fine
There’s never been a problem"
this seems kind of unrealistic though to what it leads to. i could be wrong of course, but i dont know. its your opinion that matters after all. keep up the great work. =] |
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Re: Numb--
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by acidicblasphemy on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 03:46:26 PM AEST
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"It’s going to be great
It’s going to be fine
There’s never been a problem"
It means there's never been a problem as in there has never been, not there isn't at this exact time. |
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Re: Numb--
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by desire on
Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 06:31:15 PM AEST
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Powerful write,
Was it numb from the realization of what was about to take place. At that particular moment |
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